Scene 2: The BIG shot,
track Jess from living room to Jacob who is on phone.
Jacob mildly ill, several layers on
Scene 3:
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Long dialogue sequence,
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Jess tells Jacob that T.V isn’t working.
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They argue over going to see a doctor.
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They argue Jacob falls to floor
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They make up
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Jacob comforts Jess
Jacob removes a layer, health is deteriorating. More sweat
on hair.
Scene 4: Focus on Jess
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Long track shot of Jess looking for water bottles
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Gets annoyed t T.V turns it off.
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Gets frightened by window
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Emotional scene of man dying outside
Scene 5: Flashback
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Jess writing by window
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Jess and Jacob
dialogue
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T.V playing news show
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Jacob picks up lunch Knocks off water
Scene 6:
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Jacob blurry eyes
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Jess notices eyes bleeding
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Jess going to get help
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Jacob stops her and faints
Scene 7:
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Clock ticking, time moving forward
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Dramatic shot of Jess watching T.V
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Jess sits watching Jacob
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Jacob wakes, Dialogue
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Jacobs ear bleeds
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Just the two of us dialogue
Down to t-shirt very sweaty eyes very dark
Scene 8:
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Jess wakes and reacts to T.V
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Talks to Jacob but no response
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She crawls to living room to look at T.V broadcasting
emergency
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Calls for Jacob
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Remembers water falling, finds it.
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Drinks some and goes back to Jacob
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Jacobs
dead
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She lies next to him
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The End
Jess looks visibly ill and dehydrated. Jacob looks pretty
dead.